AP Human Geography Social Issues and Geography
Writing Comments Key
Throat Clearing
Ex: "In
this paper, I will..."
Ugh / Awk
Very Awkward
Huh / ?
Clarity Issues
Choppy /
Jumpy Jumps
from One Point to Another with No Connection
MYPIYOW
Make Your Point In Your Own Words
PV
Passive Voice
V
Checks Mean You Made a Good Point
S-V
Subject - Verb Agreement
SpV
Spell Check
Rep
Repeating a Point
Red
Redundant (point made previously although maybe not directly)
Stet
Forget my Comments / Leave Your Words as They Are
RO
Run On
Frag
Fragment
P
Paragraph Stucture is Off
GR
Something with Your Grammar is Amiss
Awk
Correct in Terms of Grammar but Awkwardly Stated
TS
Topic Sentence
TH
Thesis
I
Using the First Person
ABCD
Above and Beyond the Call of Duty / Excellent Work
INC
Incomplete
Specifics
Failure to Add Specific Details
Sweep
Overgeneralization
Simplify
Using too Many Words to Get to the Point
WC
Word Choice Is Incorrect
HRT
Did not Explain How Your Point Relates to Your Thesis
OT
Off Topic
SPR
Subject to Pronoun Agreement Issue
OK
Good but not Great Work
2B
"To Be" Verb Used too Often
Sub1
Put the Subject Doing the Action First